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com: hello sir may i help you?
user: open file with reference to "
com: ok.... sir you have accesed holo-vid 23d-54e
com: warning reading this is a galactic fellony...

com:

home planet: Vurnamu(ver-naa-moo) has a earth like atmosphere, the gravity is 2.634 times earths.
Skin color: pink or brown
hair color: various versions main breeds are pure black and pure white
body type: normal hight - 9'-10' ,very muscular, fur length depends on the climate ( colder=thicker coat), Venimi claws are the 3rd hardest biological substance in the galaxy , basicly all other features are like our cats
movement: can walk on 2 ft but on all 4 ft can reach up to 47mph and can keep it up for 30min.
others: can talk and learn other speeches very quickly, they reproduce quickly, they have relitive normal term memory, they live for about 130 earth years .


politics: The Vernimi are are war-like species. Their leaders are replaced almost every generation when the older war-chief looses to a younger Vernimi. The Vernimi have no caste system, the young are taken into "war schools" they dont know thier fathers and the fathers wont remember the young to further this, the position the Vernimi have is dependent on its fighting skills, theres ranks in society are permainant except for the consols, who can challenge for war-chief status.
Leader:Rakhmus

ranks: (from highest to lowest then number of each)
war-chief(1)
consols(11)
honor guards(22)
warlords(73)
death bringers(280)
war-captains(1690)
battle-lords(5670)
brawlers(2,940,321,482)
workers[also reserve troops in war time](rest of population)



age1: age of declaration

In the early age of vernimi time (around 210 B.C. earth time) the vernimi shared the planet with the renzinkens, a ewok looking creature. and they where in a perma war with each other. But the Vernimi Where starting to gain the upper hand when they took over a massive mining point and trippled the weapon production. Finaly the renzinken leader desided to use operation: "Black storm" to block out that sun and kill the life on Vernamu. rezaj the renzinken leader's last and most hated words where "if we cant win this war then no one will win this war". This was the biggest mistake of the "eternal war",because the vernimi had the tech to get to another planet far from operation:"black storm's" reach. on the 3th of izrak on steller cycle 2342 (march 3rd 130 B.C.) black storm was launched and so was the Gernsk(final leap)the super transport got 4.8 billion vernimi off of the home planet and unkowningly to the kricktid's teritory.....


age2: age of reclamation

As the survivors of the eternal war looked on as they quickly shot away from Vernamu, a kricktid scout ship ,not knowing what the Gernsk was, took aim and fired... this would be a most costly mistake for both sides.
the scout could not get through the super cruser's shields, in fact the attack was so small the vernimi didnt even notice the mecha-organic ships pulse beams. When the kricktid hive queen was notified she started to hatch an army that could destroy an entire solar system. Although it took 37 years the vernimi finaly set up a strong military industry (in case the renzinken also had space capibility and followed them) but little did they know they where in for a fight for survival that made the eternal war seem like a sparing session. ktrita ,the hive queen, had masses an army of 7.4 bil. troops for what was gonna be one of thier weekly wars. On the eve of what is our time july 23rd 13 B.C. the hive surged on to new-vurnamu taking many small towns and much land but the bigger cities held them off... for now.....


age3: age of redemption

after about 8 years into the war the warchief merflen desided that the bugs only win because they can surround the vermini troops and overwhelm them, so he desided unstead of trying to expand out but to expand down into a highly fortifyed underground tunnel network and HQ. This was a small turning point for the vernimi, although the hive tryed to dig into the ground they couldent go deeper then about 260ft then the organic diggers couldent break the rock. But then the hive started blowing their way into the tunnels they got less then 100ft from the main tunnel line, under presure the war-chief desided to under go with a new and dangerous tech... the cration of cybernetic-organics to look like kricktids... when they made about 80 they plased them behind enemy lines and waited for the chaos. To vernimi surprise they got the job done well ... to well. Then they pumped 35% of the war industry into making them by the end of the month there was about 3000 war models and 500 builders(that made more war models with out any supplies).these were sent on operation:"rotting apple" they where to get onto the next kricktid ship going to the master hive... and kill the queen....


age4: age of Expantion

when the cyber-organics got to the main hive evrything went wrong...
the queen is in communication with every hive member subconciously and when 3500 hive members suddenly apper and arnt even alive, its time to fight for your life. The cyber-organics got to the queens chamber and by that time the workers had made an extra 345 (minus battle deaths) and the queen was just behind that door... but then the cyber-organic started thinking... "if we could beat this army so easyly we could destroy our previous owners... so the machines took a kricktid capital ship and intercepted another group of cyber-organics with 4000 workers and then fled in the direction of the phatos system and met a race of grey skined long legged people. After the war the world of the vernimi was chard but fortunatly the kircktids left in a hurry to get back to the hive and left many ships and thus the vernimi spread to almost 32 systems in only 143 steller cycles and became a well respected member of the galactic comunity and in many ways became the galactic enforcer when the krickted and other destructive races sprang up....

age5: the age of destruction

one such race at the time of mernimi power was the UNSF( united nations space force) known as the humans the war with the humans would be the most costly and destructive to the galaxy for the forces would be split and there would be the 3rd partys that caused the biggest power shifts. it started about earth year 2465 when the humans started thier imperialistic ideals on the galaxy takeing many smaller races over with little fight and enslaving them. after the humans attacked the first major empire the galaxy responded with total war and the galaxy was split with 2 sides the UEPS(united empire protection sovernty) earth and its allys and the GAP(Glactic Alliance protectorate) the vernimi and its allys. as said by this earthling's war journal "this war is legendary, it reminds me of when we learned about ww2, like evrything is blowing up, evrything is a waistland all my friends are diei... wait... here they come!!! if this is where it stops im de"
after 32 years of bloody war somthing unexpected happens the cyber-organics attacked earth... when earth was attacked all orginization that was in the UNSF defencive was lost and the GAP overran them and left very little people were left and got away... about 57 years later there was a very faint brodcast in the system it went... "zzhz...f th- ..olony of Betelgeuse...FT-...ailed...Tachyon transm..zzggz...failed---dying...please senzzd evacua-zzggzfleet. Confirm if z..-eceived...WHERE AR--OU?!!..zg" After that it was silent for a while and then continued more clearly "This is governor..zgz..Tiberius Keitel...from the colony of..."
The vernimi desided that if the humans can regrow into a powerhouse again they can have fun so they left that system untill needed... after all they are humans... they will try to expand...


[B]age6: age of ..........#@..4235523##@$5%^

Com: WARNING WARNING SYSTEM LOGING OUT!!! VERNIMI TROOPS INCOMING!!!

thanks Uriel Septim and packyk we should elaborate on these i see some story in it now Big Grin

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you and Uriel must be twin souls Tongue
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Supreme Command of the Terran Federation feels threatened by this new war-like species that has invaded our sector of space. More intelligence must be gathered before futher analysis and action can be taken, but the current reports indicate that there can be no peacefull co-existance with these "vermins".

Terran SupCom is mobilizing its scout fleets to investigate.
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SupCom intelligence report 12-a/06072321 Scout ship "Endeavor" has arrived to sector 2-3-1, near system Mu Arae, where the reports indicate recent activity by the new species MA-231, "The Vermins"

Preliminary reports are coming in...Cmdr. Vorenus reporting from site:

"This is Commander Gallius Vorenus of Corv. "Endeavor". We have just arrived to the designated area and are starting to investigate."

"...Active scans show now ships or structures within 50 units..."
"...We are not detecting any artificial signals on radio- or gravitywaves..."
"...Commissioning lightwave scans for unnormal activity on visual range..."
...computing...
"...Detecting abnormal form/pattern 74.6 units to heading 46 by 103..."
"...Acquiring target and moving to investigate..."

"We have arrived to the site of the anomaly and the object doesn't match to any known forms of ships or objects in the database. We are not detecting any kind of activity from the passive scanners. Commissioning an active scan of the objects surface."

Objects starts to pulsate in the infrared range. Intensive light of different colors start to radiate from the center of the object.

"Hold on!...we are detecting a massive energy surge inside the object! Ensign!...call on action stations!"

"Yes Sir!"

*ALERT* *ALERT* *ALL CREW REPORT TO ACTION STATIONS!* *THIS IS NOT A DRILL* *ALERT* *ALERT*

"Communications! Send first contact information and translation algorithms on all frequencies and know languages...NOW!"

"Yes Sir!"

A beam of white light shoots from the surface of object and drills trough the shielding and armor of the Endeavor.

"Command! This is Commander Vorenus! Our ship is under high-energy beam attack! If it continues it will destroy this ship! There is a very high possibility that his is an hostile action!...I repeat first contact maybe hostile! By the Rules of Conduct, Article DI-3 Im allowed to return with hostile force!"

"Ensign! Fire bow-side cannons!"

Endeavors massdrivers starts to shoot a barge of high-velocity objects towards the hostile target. They impact with a huge explosion, but it seems to have no effect on the high-energy beam cutting trough the ship.

"Sir! There is a hole in the portside of the ship! We are losing lifesupport fast! If the beam doesn't shutdown in the next 10-30 seconds it will burn trough the whole hull!"

"Affirmative ensign!"

A range of motions runs trough Vorenus mind. The odds seem highly improbable for the crew to survive if they continue the fight and evacuation is not an option cause the hull class lacks the space for evac-pods.

"Damn this! Ensign...set heading 180 by 180! Full throttle to stern-side engines. We must try to save the crew!"

"Aye, aye Sir!"

Endeavor start to turn its bow away from the hostile object. Its fast quantum engines start to warm up to full speed.

*EXPLOSION*

"SIR! Our engines took a huge hit! We are losing throttle fast! Quantum shielding is down from engines 3 and 4. Computer estimates that the null-point explosion will happen in 20 seconds!"

"DAMN THESE VERMINS!...To hell with this! Command! We have taken a hit to the critical systems...survival of this ship and its crew is highly improbable! Taking appreciate action!"

"Ensign! Set heading to the enemy object! Get every g's you can from the engines!"

"...Yes Sir!...setting heading...full throttle!...we will hit the object in 10 seconds!"

A silence settles on the bridge when the final command is given. Commander Vorenus looks around the bridge to every member of his command crew. The enemy object start to get larger on the viewscreen.

"It has been a pleasure to serve with you."

"As with you Sir!", the crew responds as one.

The Endeavor rams the hostile object. The overdriven quantum engines of the corvette explodes in a intensive burst of energy engulfing both the object and the fatally crippled ship.

[SUPCOM PRIORITY MESSAGE 2-06072321]:[Corvette-23(Endeavor),Commander Vorenus]:[CONTACT LOST>CREW MIA>POSSIBILTY OF KIA]:[LAST MESSAGE>"Revenge us"]

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...Vernimi scout-freighter: Hanclli in sector 2-3-1, near system Mu Arae...
...Ship status: critical cold fusion engines critical, shilds and wepons are out, com is disabled, atmoshpere is venting...
.....
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"sir!"

The War-captain Kyths sits in his chair on the scout-freighter Hanclli wondering what he just saw

"kyths what should we do?"

"tell the crew to repair the engines before we go critical, then shields and Beams if you can then send a report to the consol"

"yes sir! should we launch fighters and take samples off the hull type?"

"Yes good idea... im gonna go lay down tell the battle-lord hes in charge for now!"

as Kyths slowly makes his way down the hallway to his room...

*BOOOOM*

Kyths activates his com and runs back to the bridge "WHAT WAS THAT?!"

"SIR MULTIPLE IMBOUND!!!"

"MORE HUMANS?"

"KYTHS! BUGGERS! WE GOTTA GO NOW!"

"blast... how many and what class?

"there are about 40 fighters, ours can handle, and 3 cruser-class buggers!"

"SIR! shields are failing!"

"BUGGER ARCHER MISSLES ARE RIPPING THROUGH US!!"

"HANGER BAY 2-9 ARE DOWN!!"

WARNING: HOLE IN HULL EVACUATE 3RD - 5TH FLOORS

"SIR ITS HOPELESS MOST OUR FIGHTERS ARE DEAD... and our thrusters are gone... we are pined ...sir..."

"...we only have one option ... send all power to comunications and shields"

"tell the consol that we got some major problems and... we make our final stand men!"

...the Hanclli is returning fire, fighters are geting depleated, message at 34%....

...hanclli's wepons are disabled fighters are depleated switching all power to shields and comunications, message at 71% ....


....message sent Kyths....

...goodbye...


///operation status of Hanclli---- Terminated\\\
////operation: Death Blade --- activated [passcode:(******)] understood ...<war-chief activated> "Total war" --- target????="human system"\\\\
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Soo...for the next part in the story. Was it us humans that attacked you there again? Or what are these buggers? I pressume your story started where I left off? So who was the aggressor?
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read age 2 i nicknamed them buggers... and it was the ship you kamakazied
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Ah okSmile So now we think that it was the Vernimi that attacked us even thou it was a third race that the Vermini is also in war. I can see a interesting story coming upSmile

And so it begins...
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accualy encounters with you are age 5 we are writing 6 togeather i guess see read all the ages...

hmmm maybe your story line would be better...?

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Just love what you've got going. Big Grin

A few tips from a seasoned roleplayer:

- Don't involve other players in a history / timeline.

- Don't try to fit current events into history you've already written - it never works.

- Don't presume things about the other part in the RP.

I know your RP doesn't warrant these tips (since you don't seem to go against them), so please just consider them of general interest (I hope).
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